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The Wild West Show disbanded just before World War I. Having been declared the most successful traveling show of all time.

The sentences are written correctly in the paper

When the Wild West Show disbanded just before World War I, it was declared the most successful traveling show of all time.

The Wild West Show disbanded just before World War I, at that time it was declared the most successful traveling show of all time.

The accomplishments of Old Ironsides helped unite Americans behind the war effort, boosting morale and ending the myth that Britain's Royal Navy was invincible.

The accomplishments of Old Ironsides helped unite Americans behind the war effort. Boosting morale and ending the myth that Britain's Royal Navy was invincible.

The accomplishments of Old Ironsides helping unite Americans behind the war effort, boosting morale and ending the myth that Britain's Royal Navy was invincible.

The accomplishments of Old Ironsides helped unite Americans behind the war effort by boosting morale. And ending the myth that Britain's Royal Navy was invincible.

For example, when I misfiled an important realty document, I reminded myself. Of all the other documents I had filed correctly.

For example, I misfiled an important realty document, I reminded myself of all the other documents I had filed correctly.

For example, when I misfiled an important realty document, I reminded myself of all the other documents I had filed correctly.

For example, when I misfiled an important realty document and reminded myself of all the other documents I had filed correctly.

As I watched friends find dates for homecoming, I was initially a little discouraged. Because it looked as though my first homecoming dance would be missing a key character.

Sentence 4 is written correctly.

As I watched friends find dates for homecoming. I was initially a little discouraged because it looked as though my first homecoming dance would be missing a key character.

As I watched friends find dates for homecoming, I was initially a little discouraged. It looked as though my first homecoming dance would be missing a key character.

The sentences are written correctly in the paper.

The 11-year-old also began writing a diary it detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.

The 11-year-old also began writing a diary. With details about what was happening in her region of Pakistan.

The 11-year-old also began writing a diary that detailed what was happening in her region of Pakistan.

Attempting one shallow takeoff after another. Each time it banged itself against the glass.

It attempted one shallow takeoff after another, each time banging itself against the glass.

It attempted one shallow takeoff after another. Each time banging itself against the glass.

Attempting one shallow takeoff after another and each time banging itself against the glass.

Sentences 18 and 19 are written correctly in the paper.

In addition to electing leaders, voters get to say yes or no to questions, they are related to their local communities.

In addition to electing leaders, voters get to say yes or no to questions related to their local communities.

In addition to electing leaders, voters get to say yes or no to questions. That are related to their local communities.

I finally worked up the courage. My initial splash instantly put all my worries to rest, the experience was invigorating.

I finally worked up the courage, my initial splash instantly put all my worries to rest, the experience was invigorating.

I finally worked up the courage, and my initial splash, instantly, put all my worries to rest and the experience was invigorating.

finally worked up the courage, and my initial splash instantly put all my worries to rest. The experience was invigorating.

Change 'set' to 'setted'

No change should be made in sentence 7.

Change the comma to a period

Change 'determined' to 'determinned'