Redundancy

It is important to have class materials handy. Bookbags are a convenient way to hold many things. They are necessary for most students. Sturdy bookbags have lots of space for heavy textbooks and notebooks.

River Oak Elementary fifth graders will visit the Franklin County Fair next month. They will visit Smith's Apple Orchards and they will visit Riverbanks Zoo. Mr. Randolph said they will visit Washington D.C. at the end of the year.

A hybrid vehicle uses two or more power sources to move. It uses a rechargeable energy storage system and a fuel based power source. Hybrid cars recharge their batteries by capturing kinetic energy through regenerative braking.

Many people eat bananas because they are a delicious and nutritious food source. This fruit is grown in at least 107 countries. Bananas come in a variety of shapes and colors. Health benefits include Vitamin C and Vitamin B6. They are also very low in saturated fat and sodium.

Every weeknight, I enjoy playing the piano. I enjoy watching television when I get home from school. Another thing I enjoy is swimming. I will always enjoy these activities.

Zippers are very common in all kinds of clothing. However, years ago the zipper was used only on boots. Then the U.S. Army decided to add zippers to its gear and soldier clothing. Fasteners for clothing include buttons, buckles, and snaps-but zippers will always be a favorite.

Licorice candy is popular for its rich taste. Licorice root has been loved for over 3,000 years. King Tut and Alexander the Great loved licorice. Today, people going to the movies love to eat licorice as a sweet snack. Some people love red licorice. Others love black licorice.

In 1858 an amazing structure was completed in London. It contained Big Ben, a famous clock. England celebrated the 150th anniversary of the tower in 2009. The timepiece’s movement is most known for being reliable.

Which sentence does not contain redundancy?

Identify the issue with the sentence: I walked to my car, with my friend as she walked with me.

What's wrong with the sentence: I sharpened my pencil because I have to write with my pencil so I sharpened it. 

What change should be made to the sentence: The way she told the story intrigued him and interest him. 

What change should be made to the sentence: He removed the redundant information that was needlessly repetitive 

How should the sentence be corrected: His score on the test was tiny and extremely small. 

How should the following be fixed: Thomas was first offered a job as a clerk, but he eventually became the manager.