Question 1

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 7 and 8?

Accepted Answer

Graffiti is generally numbers, letters, or symbols, while street art uses visual images in much the same way a painting does.

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Graffiti is generally numbers, letters, or symbols; and street art uses visual images in much the same way a painting does.

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Graffiti is generally numbers, letters, or symbols; in fact, street art uses visual images in much the same way a painting does.

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Graffiti is generally numbers, letters, symbols, or street art that uses visual images in much the same way a painting does.

Question 2

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 11?

Accepted Answer

The owner might do so in order to beautify the area around the building, to call attention to the building, or to show support for the arts.

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The owner might do so because of beautifying the area around the building, calling attention to the building, or support for the arts.

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The owner might do so in order to beautify the area around the building, calling attention to the building, or supporting the arts.

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The owner might do so because of the beautiful area around the building, or to call attention to the building, or to show support for the arts.

Question 3

Amir wants to improve the transition into paragraph 3 (sentences 12–16). What is the most effective transition to add to the beginning of sentence 12?

Accepted Answer

On the other hand

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In fact

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For example

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As a result

Question 4

Amir does not think that lawless is the best word to use in sentence 13. Which of the following would be a more effective word to use in this sentence?

Accepted Answer

Illegal

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Dishonest

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Banned

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Criticized

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