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Revising / Editing Check In 1

Quiz by Samantha Cubbage

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  • Q1
    Amanda needs to establish a more effective position in her letter. Which rewrite of sentence 1 can BEST accomplish this goal?
    D. The Benson County Museum shows the long and varied history of the people of Benson County.
    C. The Benson County Museum receives many visitors during the year.
    A. The Benson County Museum is falling apart.
    B. The Benson County Museum is in need of additional funding in order to remain open.
    120s
  • Q2
    Amanda would like to tell more about the idea she expressed in sentence 5. Which sentence could BEST follow and support sentence 5?
    B. The museum has hosted people interested in trains from all around the world.
    D. Special instructors prepare the mentors to help at the museum through the months of January to May.
    A. Many of the older students have been to the museum before.
    C. The classes help students conduct tours of the museum.
    120s
  • Q3
    Which sentence in the fifth paragraph (sentences 11-16) should be deleted?
    C. Many additional hours are donated each year to keep the vintage railroad engine and cars in good working order.
    B. Thousands of volunteer hours helped restore the old engine to its original condition.
    D. Other volunteers help run the train during the year providing riders a brief glimpse into what it was like to ride the rails one hundred years ago.
    A. Railroad engines were invented more than one hundred years ago.
    120s
  • Q4
    Sentence 13 is unclear because Amanda has chosen an inappropriate word. What change should Amanda make to improve this sentence?
    F. Change It to The engine
    J. Change railroad to museum
    G. Change museum to town
    H. Change piece to condition
    120s
  • Q5
    Amanda would like to add the following sentence to the sixth paragraph: "The building is more than one hundred years old and in need of extensive maintenance, repairs, and several renovations." Where is the BEST place to insert this sentence?
    B. After sentence 17
    C After sentence 19
    A. After sentence 18
    D After sentence 20
    120s
  • Q6
    Amanda has used a poor choice of words in sentence 25. She should change stuff to -
    things
    procedures
    project
    fund
    120s
  • Q7
    What change, if any, should be made in sentence 6?
    Change ourselves to themselves
    No change should be made in sentence 6.
    Change mentoring to mentored
    Change that to whose
    120s
  • Q8
    What change, if any, should be made in sentence 8?
    Sentence 8 should not be changed.
    Change classes to clases
    Change were to was
    Insert a comma after children
    120s
  • Q9
    What change, if any, needs to be made in sentence 13?
    Change then to than
    No change needs to be made in sentence 13.
    Change by to buy
    Change was to has
    120s
  • Q10
    How should sentence 22 be changed?
    Sentence 22 should not be changed.
    Delete no
    Insert a comma after or
    Change interruption to interrupsion
    120s
  • Q11
    How should sentence 23 be changed?
    Change maintenance to maintenances
    Insert Accordingly in front of The
    Add a comma after start
    Change board of directors to Board of Directors
    120s
  • Q12
    What change, if any, should be made in sentence 24?
    Change begin to begun
    Insert a comma after raised
    No change should be made in sentence 24.
    Change Once to Onse
    120s

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