Question 1

What is the most effective way to combine sentences 8 and 9?

Accepted Answer

His favorite book was Judy Blume’s 'Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing'.

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He had a favorite book and Judy Blume’s 'Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing'.

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He had a favorite book it was Judy Blume’s 'Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing'.

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He had a favorite book, since it was Judy Blume’s 'Tales of a Fourth Grade Nothing'.

Question 2

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 20?

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All the while he had been thinking of a story about a regular kid.

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All the while a regular kid had been thinking about a story.

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All the while he had been thinking of a story it was about a regular kid.

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All the while he had been thinking about a regular kid and a story.

Question 3

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 9?

Accepted Answer

Insert a comma after 'brown'

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No change should be made in sentence 9.

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Change 'are usually around' to 'were usually around'

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Change 'weigh' to 'wiegh'

Question 4

What is the correct way to write sentences 11 and 12?

Accepted Answer

With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers in the tropical forest.

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With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers. In the tropical forest.

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Sentences 11 and 12 are written correctly in the paper.

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With their excellent color vision, they are able to find fruit and flowers these are in the tropical forest.

Question 5

What is the correct way to write sentence 16?

Accepted Answer

They live in family groups called troops that can have as many as 20 members.

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The family groups they live in are called troops and can have. As many as 20 members.

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Living in family groups called troops that can have as many as 20 members.

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They live in family groups called troops. And can have as many as 20 members.

Question 6

What change needs to be made in sentence 9?

Accepted Answer

Delete the comma

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Change 'your' to 'you’re'

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Change 'produces' to 'produses'

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Change 'It' to 'And'

Question 7

What change, if any, should be made in sentence 25?

Accepted Answer

Change 'it’s' to 'its'

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Delete the comma after 'lakes'

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Change 'swimming' to 'swiming'

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No change should be made in sentence 25.

Question 8

What is the correct way to write sentence 8?

Accepted Answer

Lady Liberty was designed in France and made out of copper and steel.

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Sentence 8 is written correctly in the paper.

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Lady Liberty was designed in France. And made out of copper and steel.

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Lady Liberty was designed in France. Because she was made out of copper and steel.

Question 9

What is the correct way to write sentences 13 and 14?

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She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate America’s independence from Great Britain.

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She was also a birthday present meant to celebrate. America’s independence from Great Britain.

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She was also a birthday present. Which was meant to celebrate America’s independence from Great Britain.

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She was also a birthday present she was meant to celebrate America’s independence from Great Britain.

Question 10

What change should be made in sentence 15?

Accepted Answer

Change revolutionary war to Revolutionary War

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Change French to french

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Change were to was

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Change they to it

Question 11

What is the correct way to write sentence 29?

Accepted Answer

Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound before the waves carried her away again.

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Zoey took one last look at the sandy mound. Before the waves carried her away again.

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Zoey taking one last look at the sandy mound, and then the waves carrying her away again.

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Zoey taking one last look at the sandy mound. Then the waves carried her away again.

Question 12

How should sentence 11 be changed?

Accepted Answer

Change threw to through

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Sentence 11 should not be changed.

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Change poked to pokked

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Change an egg to a egg

Question 13

What change should be made in sentence 6?

Accepted Answer

Change draged to dragged

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Insert a comma after dry

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Delete As

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Change felt to feeled

Question 14

What change needs to be made in sentence 2?

Accepted Answer

Change quiet to quite

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Change not to she was not

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Change lumbered to lumbering

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No change needs to be made in sentence 2.

Question 15

How does sentence 21 need to be changed?

Accepted Answer

Change beleive to believe

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Change rays to ray’s

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Sentence 21 does not need to be changed.

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Insert a comma after oceans

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