Question 1

Damian has not effectively stated the position he is taking in this paper. Which of the following could best replace sentence 7 and provide a stronger position statement for Damian's paper?

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This low voter turnout is appalling, and all Americans should exercise their right to vote.

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There are groups that review human rights violations in this country as well as in other countries around the world.

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I plan to vote in both national and local elections.

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Can you believe this outrageous statistic?

Question 2

Damian needs a stronger closing for his paper. Which sentences should he add after sentence 28 to bring his paper to a more effective conclusion?

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When Election Day comes, go to the polls and cast your vote. It's not only your right but also your responsibility.

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Don't be lazy. Get off the couch and do something that matters.

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You must be the one who changes this. It isn't fair to make others think they have all the rights.

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You'll feel better if you persuade people to vote. You can help make your community more vibrant.

Question 3

Simon's paper needs a position statement. Which of these sentences could best follow sentence 7 and state the position that Simon is taking in this paper?

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It's time to require cyclists to register and license their bikes.

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We have many bicyclists on the roadways of our town.

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They're drivers and should be given the respect that they deserve.

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If they're going to use public roadways, they should own them, too.

Question 4

Which of these sentences could best follow and support sentence 13?

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They consider others, and they recognize and follow rules.

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People don't think about how their actions make others feel.

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This means that these commuters are usually polite and nice.

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The next time you're on the road, pay attention to those around you.

Question 5

Simon needs to respond to an argument he has suggested that people will make. Which of the following could come after sentence 32 and best accomplish this goal?

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This is true, so I would suggest that bike fees be significantly lower than automobile fees.

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Bikes don't create potholes, and they don't leave grease and gas marks.

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With that said, it wouldn't be fair to ask bicyclists to pay to use the roadways.

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Bicyclists just want a place to be certain that they can ride on the roads safely.

Question 6

Simon needs a sentence to help close his paper. Which sentence could be added to the very end of this paper to help bring it to an effective conclusion?

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I'm convinced that requiring bicyclists to register and license their bikes would result in safer streets and happier travels for all.

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If you own or have access to a bicycle, it might just be the perfect time for you to start riding it to school or work.

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Bicycling is clearly the most effective form of transportation, and we should encourage all riders to participate actively.

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In closing, it's time for us to add some rules and regulations that all bicyclists will be able to follow and that motorists will appreciate.

Question 7

Susan needs a better transition from the third paragraph (sentences 15-20) to the fourth paragraph (sentences 21-25). Which of the following can be added to the beginning of the fourth paragraph, just before sentence 21, to strengthen this transition?

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This ability to communicate in person becomes even more important as teenagers get older.

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In a few short years, most teens in our school will be entering the job market or college.

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In a business setting, a teen will need to know how to understand his coworkers.

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Learning to read people's communication cues will help build opportunities for teens.

Question 8

Sentence 26 does not effectively open the last paragraph (sentences 26-28). Which of the following can replace sentence 26 and help strengthen the concluding paragraph of this paper?

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Offline networking is important because it can improve a teenager's well-being and help prepare him for the future.'

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Every teen will need to practice offline communication so they can get used to talking with others.

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Both online and offline relationships are important in today's world of instant communication.

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Dealing with people when you are a teen offline will help you in a handful of critical ways.

Question 9

What is the most effective revision to make in sentence 3?

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But it wasn't often that a news story about a cow was so remarkable that when engaged, it made national headlines for a week with the problem-solving skills of people all over the country.

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No revision is needed in sentence 3.

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But it wasn't often that a news story about a cow was so remarkable that it made national headlines for a week and engaged the problem-solving skills of people all over the country.

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But it wasn't often that a news story about a cow was so remarkable that it made national headlines for a week, so the problem-solving skills of people all over the country were engaged.

Question 10

Xavier would like to add some sentences to help transition from the third paragraph (sentences 14-17) to the fourth paragraph (sentences 18-26). Which of the following could Xavier add after sentence 17?

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Each suggestion had its own problems. And in the meantime Grady remained stuck.

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People from all around the country had ideas that they wanted to share. Some were good; others not so much.

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Should they tear it down? Should they use a helicopter?

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A helicopter could be dangerous. Obviously, it would be costly.

Question 11

Xavier realizes that he should have added the following sentence to the fourth paragraph (sentences 18-26). 
Where is the most effective place to insert this sentence?

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After sentence 18

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After sentence 22

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After sentence 19

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After sentence 24

Question 12

Which of the following could replace sentence 3 and better articulate the position Kayla is trying to take in this paper?

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However, in recent years the line between the two has blurred, making it more important than ever for people to be cognizant of how they present themselves online.

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Social networking, through such sites as Facebook, Twitter, and Instagram, is common today among teens, adults, and even the elderly.

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People could act and talk a certain way online, but in real life they may be totally different.

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However, in today's world, where Internet activity is such a common occurrence, an online persona cannot be separated from real-life activities and views.

Question 13

Kayla wants to provide a stronger transition between the second paragraph (sentences 4-12) and the third paragraph (sentences 13-16). Which of the following could best replace sentence 13 and accomplish this goal?

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There are also dangers in posting other kinds of information on social media.

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Be cautious as you give out information about other people, too.

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Listen to this story about what happened to one couple.

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Some employers will be concerned about information you may have posted many years ago.

Question 14

Kayla wants to add a quotation that will help support the idea presented in sentence 16. Analyze the quotations below. Which of these would be the most effective to insert after sentence 16?

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One state official noted, "It's the same as giving the key to your house to a burglar."

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The founder of Facebook once said, "When you give everyone a voice and give people power, the system usually ends up in a really good place."

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"Our head of social media is the customer," said a spokesperson for one well-known company.

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"We're all social creatures," one magazine states.

Question 15

Kelly wants to add a more effective transition between the second paragraph (sentences 4-11) and the third paragraph (sentences 12-14). Which of the following sentences should be added before sentence 12 to help readers effectively transition from the second to the third paragraph?

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Sleepiness also may occur if the body's circadian rhythm, or internal body clock, is disrupted.

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Interfering with the natural circadian rhythms is equally distracting.

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Perhaps more serious, though, is how this sleepiness can affect a person's mood.

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Using the snooze button can have a negative impact on a person's health.

Question 16

Kelly is considering whether or not she should add the following supporting detail to the fourth paragraph (sentences 15-20). Where could Kelly place this sentence?

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Kelly should not add this sentence to the paragraph.

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After sentence 18

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After sentence 17

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After sentence 16

Question 17

Kelly wants to end her essay with a call to action. Which sentence should she add after sentence 21 to best achieve this goal?

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Banish the snooze button and develop healthier sleep habits to feel rested and ready for your busy days.

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People should stop interrupting sleep cycles with the snooze button in order to get more sleep.

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Put that alarm on the other side of the room and turn off electronics in order to feel more rested.

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The snooze button contributes to unhealthy sleep patterns and should not be used on a regular basis.

Question 18

Tracy's paper needs a stronger position statement. Which of the following could best replace sentence 5 and more effectively state the position Tracy is taking in this paper?

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Therefore, the electric car is the wrong choice if you are currently in the market for a new car.

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Truthfully, electric cars have advantages that must be pondered before making a purchase.

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In other words, the electric car is not what you should buy today, and that is my definitive opinion.

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However, buying an electric car is always an option when you are thinking about a new car.

Question 19

Tracy would like to add the following detail to the fourth paragraph (sentences 13-17). Where should this sentence be inserted?

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After sentence 14

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After sentence 17

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After sentence 13

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Tracy should not add this detail to the fourth paragraph.

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