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Jim and i study english every friday.

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David lost his wallet, and books at school,

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When it was time to consider college william spent many hours with Ms Lewis thinking about his future After reading his journals, Ms Lewis suggested that perhaps William would be happiest at a College where he could study creative writing The rest is history

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The governor gave a speech at the fourth of July picnic, which was held at my cousin’s farm five miles east of town.

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“Last semester, I wrote my history report on the Korean war,” my sister told me.

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when I first saw the black hills on january 2, 1995, i was shocked by their beauty. we had just spent new year’s day in sioux falls, south dakota, and had headed west toward our home in denver, colorado. as we traveled along interstate 90, i could see the black hills rising slightly in the distance. after driving through the badlands and stopping at wall drug in wall, south dakota, the evergreen-covered hills broke the barren monotony of the landscape. my oldest daughter said, “dad, look! there’s something that’s not all white.” we saw mount rushmore and custer state park, the home of the largest herd of buffalo in north america. we also drove the treacherous spearfish canyon road. fortunately, our jeep cherokee had no trouble with the ice and snow on the winding road. we were unable to see needles national park because the needles highway was snowed shut. winter may not be the best time to see these sights, but we enjoyed them nonetheless.

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William was one of the Top Students in the creative writing Program at the University of Wisconsin during his Junior Year, one of his essays was accepted for publication in a National magazine, and soon after that, William received a call from an editor at Bound brook publishing who wanted to publish a collection of William’s short stories as soon as the book was published William sent a copy to Ms Lewis thanking her for her support and advice

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Now he was on his way back to visit Ms Lewis and his other teachers, who were probably all asking the same question Can this be the same William Reese

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I hastily opened the mailbox. Hoping to find the promised envelope. There it was. Between the Life magazine and the Fingerhut catalog. The promised letter. When I finally finished reading the entire mailing. I realized my chances were really no better with this contest than they had been for any other contest I had entered in the past and I was dis- appointed that I had spent so much time reading all of the material then I threw it all in the recycling basket and went to bed. Dejected.

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Just the other day, I came home from work as excited as I had ever been. The night before, someone from Publisher’s Clearinghouse had called. To tell me that I would be receiving a prize package worth poten- tially millions of dollars. I was so excited because, unlike other offers, this really sounded legitimate, it sounded to me as though I might really win some- thing this time.